Post by Frosty on Jul 10, 2014 8:01:39 GMT
FROZEN SONGS: WRITTEN VERSION
Take note that I'm just a beginner when it comes into writing, so I hope you still like it if it isn't really well-written.
Yep, you heard it, I'm going to turn all of Frozen's popular songs to a written one! I'll be updating this thread every week/month (depends on how hard it is on translating a song to a short story-like version). For now, enjoy reading. And if you want, you can give me some tips on how to improve my English (because I'm Filipino, and English isn't my first language xD). Oh, and please point out mistakes I have put in the songs below so I can quickly fix it. Thanks!
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SONGS
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Do You Want to Build a Snowman
Let it Go
Love is an Open Door
For The First Time in Forever
In Summer
Fixer Upper
Take note that I'm just a beginner when it comes into writing, so I hope you still like it if it isn't really well-written.
Yep, you heard it, I'm going to turn all of Frozen's popular songs to a written one! I'll be updating this thread every week/month (depends on how hard it is on translating a song to a short story-like version). For now, enjoy reading. And if you want, you can give me some tips on how to improve my English (because I'm Filipino, and English isn't my first language xD). Oh, and please point out mistakes I have put in the songs below so I can quickly fix it. Thanks!
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SONGS
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Do You Want to Build a Snowman
Young Anna quickly dashed towards the window, she noticed it was already snowing, and the first thing that came to her mind was... "build a snowman!". And she won't be able to build one, without her sister's help! She excitedly ran to her sister's bedroom, but before that, she knocked at the door.
"Elsa? Do you want to build a snowman!" she made a huge smile, and lifted her arms up "Come out let's go and play!"
Anna spinned, pushed her back to the door and slowly fell "I've never seen you anymore!" and after for a few seconds, she bent down and sneaked at the hole under the door "Come out the door! It's like you've gone away!".
Young Anna stood up happily, ran to her bedroom and pulled out two of her favorite dolls, and quickly went downstairs to the ballroom. She sat at the center of the place, playing with her dolls, and after for a few minutes, she whispered; "We use to be best buddies," Anna's face turned into a sad one "but... now we're not. I wish you could tell me why!"
Few minutes later, she's now standing in front of Elsa's room door again, "Do you want to build a snowman?" not sure if Elsa heard her, she stuck her mouth in the door's keyhole "It doesn't have to be a snowman!" she waited for an answer, and guess what?
"Go away, Anna!" yelled Elsa.
Anna, surprised at Elsa's response, slowly turned back and went back to her room. Days had passed; Elsa, waiting for her father, suddenly went in her room. "Papa!" The young ice manipulator leaped and hug her father.
"Elsa, I bought something for you!" king Agdar said.
"The gloves! Yes!" replied Elsa excitedly.
The king bent on his knees so he can reach his daughter, and slowly put it on young Elsa's hands. "Conceal it, don't feel it," then together they said "Don't let it show".
Years gone by, Anna is now a grown-up child, the same goes for Elsa. Anna dashed towards her sister's room door and, like what she did when she was really young, knocked
"Do you want to build a snowman?" she quickly rode her bicycle and drove towards the stairs "Or ride our bikes around the halls?"
And since it's kind of impossible for a young person like her to drive a bike on a stairs, you already know what happened next, she fell! Luckily, she was caught by the hands of a complete armor set of a knight. She stood on her feet and ran to the living room, "I think some company is overdue, I've started talking to the pictures on the wall!" she did a front-flip to a sofa and pointed her finger to a huge portrait of Joan of Arc, a french woman, "Hang in there, Joan!"
Anna is feeling a bit bored, and instead of doing something that will make her happy, she lay down in front of a grandfather clock. "It gets a little lonely..." she said "all these empty rooms, just watching the hours tick by!"
Then she made a sound, "Tick-tock-tick-tock-tick-tock"
It was already evening, inside Elsa's bedroom, the corner of the wall has now turned into ice. Her parents tried helping her, but she said that her powers is "getting stronger" and that they shouldn't "come near her" or else they're going to turn into ice statues.
A few years later had passed, both the king and queen's daughters are now teenagers. Anna sprinted in front of Elsa's door, she was going to knock but ignored her, since she knew that Elsa's not going to answer her anyway. She continued all the way to downstairs, and hugged her parents, who are currently busy packing their stuffs. Anna quietly left, and minutes later Elsa went downstairs, now well-dressed.
"Do you really have to go?" she asked her parents, and bowed.
The king and queen smiled, and her father replied, "You'll be fine, Elsa."
What king Agdar promised to her was broken, during a ship ride on a stormy day, the vehicle lost control due to the strong and high waves, and later on, it sank to the bottom of the sea, leading them to death. After hearing about this, the sisters felt sad, of course. During the funeral, Anna attended, but her sister didn't because she might expose her ice powers to everyone. Days later after the death of their parents, Anna slowly walked towards Elsa's room door with a sad face. She knocked, not happily, and began singing.
"Elsa, please I know you're in there. People are asking where've you been." then she took a deep breath "They say have courage, and I'm trying to, I'm out here for you, just let me in..."
She was starting to cry, tears coming out from her eyes really slow, "We only have each other, it's just you and me. What are we gonna do?" then she turned back, and slid down. Anna blinked for a few seconds before saying her last sentence, "Do you want to build a snowman?"
"Elsa? Do you want to build a snowman!" she made a huge smile, and lifted her arms up "Come out let's go and play!"
Anna spinned, pushed her back to the door and slowly fell "I've never seen you anymore!" and after for a few seconds, she bent down and sneaked at the hole under the door "Come out the door! It's like you've gone away!".
Young Anna stood up happily, ran to her bedroom and pulled out two of her favorite dolls, and quickly went downstairs to the ballroom. She sat at the center of the place, playing with her dolls, and after for a few minutes, she whispered; "We use to be best buddies," Anna's face turned into a sad one "but... now we're not. I wish you could tell me why!"
Few minutes later, she's now standing in front of Elsa's room door again, "Do you want to build a snowman?" not sure if Elsa heard her, she stuck her mouth in the door's keyhole "It doesn't have to be a snowman!" she waited for an answer, and guess what?
"Go away, Anna!" yelled Elsa.
Anna, surprised at Elsa's response, slowly turned back and went back to her room. Days had passed; Elsa, waiting for her father, suddenly went in her room. "Papa!" The young ice manipulator leaped and hug her father.
"Elsa, I bought something for you!" king Agdar said.
"The gloves! Yes!" replied Elsa excitedly.
The king bent on his knees so he can reach his daughter, and slowly put it on young Elsa's hands. "Conceal it, don't feel it," then together they said "Don't let it show".
Years gone by, Anna is now a grown-up child, the same goes for Elsa. Anna dashed towards her sister's room door and, like what she did when she was really young, knocked
"Do you want to build a snowman?" she quickly rode her bicycle and drove towards the stairs "Or ride our bikes around the halls?"
And since it's kind of impossible for a young person like her to drive a bike on a stairs, you already know what happened next, she fell! Luckily, she was caught by the hands of a complete armor set of a knight. She stood on her feet and ran to the living room, "I think some company is overdue, I've started talking to the pictures on the wall!" she did a front-flip to a sofa and pointed her finger to a huge portrait of Joan of Arc, a french woman, "Hang in there, Joan!"
Anna is feeling a bit bored, and instead of doing something that will make her happy, she lay down in front of a grandfather clock. "It gets a little lonely..." she said "all these empty rooms, just watching the hours tick by!"
Then she made a sound, "Tick-tock-tick-tock-tick-tock"
It was already evening, inside Elsa's bedroom, the corner of the wall has now turned into ice. Her parents tried helping her, but she said that her powers is "getting stronger" and that they shouldn't "come near her" or else they're going to turn into ice statues.
A few years later had passed, both the king and queen's daughters are now teenagers. Anna sprinted in front of Elsa's door, she was going to knock but ignored her, since she knew that Elsa's not going to answer her anyway. She continued all the way to downstairs, and hugged her parents, who are currently busy packing their stuffs. Anna quietly left, and minutes later Elsa went downstairs, now well-dressed.
"Do you really have to go?" she asked her parents, and bowed.
The king and queen smiled, and her father replied, "You'll be fine, Elsa."
What king Agdar promised to her was broken, during a ship ride on a stormy day, the vehicle lost control due to the strong and high waves, and later on, it sank to the bottom of the sea, leading them to death. After hearing about this, the sisters felt sad, of course. During the funeral, Anna attended, but her sister didn't because she might expose her ice powers to everyone. Days later after the death of their parents, Anna slowly walked towards Elsa's room door with a sad face. She knocked, not happily, and began singing.
"Elsa, please I know you're in there. People are asking where've you been." then she took a deep breath "They say have courage, and I'm trying to, I'm out here for you, just let me in..."
She was starting to cry, tears coming out from her eyes really slow, "We only have each other, it's just you and me. What are we gonna do?" then she turned back, and slid down. Anna blinked for a few seconds before saying her last sentence, "Do you want to build a snowman?"
Let it Go
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Love is an Open Door
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For The First Time in Forever
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In Summer
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Fixer Upper
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